Wednesday, December 16, 2009

Salon De Las Playas Can You See If This Is Right French? ?

Can you see if this is right French? ? - salon de las playas

Ok, I have a big test ahead of France and I have to make a video of five rooms in my house. In every room I have to show three things. Could you please check if this makes sense. (Remember, this is at my house, I'm talking about the video and the spelling and grammar) is not important:) Thank you soooo much! Thank you!

Hello! Je'maplle Hannah. Aujourd'hoi, I will bring you to my house. I live in Masion United Nations. These six bedrooms, three bathrooms, toilets duex, exhibition UN Salon duex a manger, Bereau United Nations, the United Nations for the kitchen, basement and garage.
I'm going to bring cooking, hairdressing salon, a salon in the manger, desktop and bedroom.
Is cooking. There is a refrigerator, microwave and duex fluere. In the room there is placed in a manger, duex window and ten clock. The sofa is eight and a lounge, carpets United Nations and a television. In the table, there is duex fourth cabinet hinges, and a library. MY FATHER, and this is my single room. There is a bed duex door, and a worker. Thank you! Aurevioir!

Please answer back in English:) Thank you soooo much!

2 comments:

Manhatta... said...

Hello! My name is Hannah. Today I am going to do (yes, twice "to do", but it's how you say it) around my house. I live in a house with six rooms, garage, three bathrooms, two bathrooms, living room, two dining rooms, the United Nations Office, kitchen, basement and the United Nations.
I'll see you in the kitchen, living room, dining room, office and bedroom.
This is the kitchen. There is a fridge (or fridge), microwave and two? (What fluere). The dining room is a table and two windows ten chairs. In the lounge there are eight beds, carpets and a television. In the office there are four furniture ( "Company" means "bath" in French, so it is not appropriate here), two paintings and a library. This is the room with their parents this month. It is a bed, two doors and a closet. Thank you and goodbye.

Here are some tips:
"This is" not available or is "This is" or "it"
The nakedmber two is written: "Two" and not "duex" as you repeatedly written.
"Mesa" no "Bereau"
It's "dining room", not "dining room

Good luck with the video.

Manhatta... said...

Hello! My name is Hannah. Today I am going to do (yes, twice "to do", but it's how you say it) around my house. I live in a house with six rooms, garage, three bathrooms, two bathrooms, living room, two dining rooms, the United Nations Office, kitchen, basement and the United Nations.
I'll see you in the kitchen, living room, dining room, office and bedroom.
This is the kitchen. There is a fridge (or fridge), microwave and two? (What fluere). The dining room is a table and two windows ten chairs. In the lounge there are eight beds, carpets and a television. In the office there are four furniture ( "Company" means "bath" in French, so it is not appropriate here), two paintings and a library. This is the room with their parents this month. It is a bed, two doors and a closet. Thank you and goodbye.

Here are some tips:
"This is" not available or is "This is" or "it"
The nakedmber two is written: "Two" and not "duex" as you repeatedly written.
"Mesa" no "Bereau"
It's "dining room", not "dining room

Good luck with the video.

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